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Super God(dess)
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Post by iled on Aug 28, 2005 23:06:48 GMT -5
isn' t that great jane, we had a work conference and we had the Drum Cafe there ( you should check the website www.drumcafe.com I think) and he had about 500 of us playing the drums and then he read this poem, it was moving and inspiring and I love to share it because it got me to the bone. Glad you like it! |
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Post by Dragonheart on Aug 28, 2005 23:49:05 GMT -5
some little poems which came from the top of my head - enjoy...
Determination comes from with your head
Ispiration comes from the heart
Patience comes from the stomach
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Feeling there is love there is life
feeling the kiss you feel the love
seeing the blue sky after rain bring hope
hearing the birds sing there is peace
knowing people are there to help
gives the attitude to be who I am
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There is no tomorrow only today
today brings the sun and the rain
pleasure to see the birds play
as spring edges closer from this day
night brings the stars that twinkle at me
too may stars to count for the eye to see
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My friends are here for me
they live far away
the internet brings them closer
to my words and feelings
they will never leave unless I do
that will never happen I love you all
pain is turning be with me as I fight
the hell I created but will never go into
the box is waiting at the other end
turn to the dust on which I command you
I will leave the harm and the hurt behind
as I seek the love within my heart
and within the man I am looking for
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
editted due to several typos....
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Post by flipdog3000 on Aug 29, 2005 19:38:08 GMT -5
I like `em.
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Post by Dragonheart on Aug 30, 2005 7:52:31 GMT -5
they were made on the spot and have found a few mistakes *growls at one self* - oh well I am human after all...
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Post by dijonketchup on Aug 30, 2005 20:00:02 GMT -5
I've grown really fond of your poetry; been reading it since, well, this section was made.  It's nice, because what you write mirrors how I feel quite a bit. |
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Post by Dragonheart on Aug 30, 2005 22:50:05 GMT -5
which one is your fave?
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Post by dijonketchup on Aug 31, 2005 15:17:15 GMT -5
Hrm. Probably 'In My Head', or 'No More Feeling Lonely'...
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Post by Dragonheart on Aug 31, 2005 18:49:29 GMT -5
"In my head" is a basis for a song that is being written right now...
"No more being lonely" was written when I finally realised that I saw the love within
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Post by Dragonheart on Sept 6, 2005 5:03:58 GMT -5
My Love poem
I feel your love
Within my heart
that the pain
has been the hurdle
that I need to face
on a daily basis
Where the love
and life cross paths
in a blustery storm
that hide the tears
and the sadness
I have been found
Hiding behind an tree
Picked up and held
lovingly and caringly
with no hurt or harm
violence and abuse
I feel you
I love you
You love me
Love my life
Love me for me
Love the person who is here
nothing can take the love away
love is all around
take care of the love
and each other
as we are all one
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jane
Special God(dess)
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Love is our highest word, and the synonym of God.
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Post by jane on Sept 6, 2005 18:41:07 GMT -5
thats great DH. i think we all need that.
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Post by Dragonheart on Sept 6, 2005 22:38:20 GMT -5
I was having my weird moment when the unconditional love is there and it took me all this time to figure it out...
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Post by dijonketchup on Sept 7, 2005 21:58:54 GMT -5
Well, this sucks.
Untitled (Of course!)
I have to agree with him sometimes:
Just go to hell.
Maybe you should stop thinking about your own problems for a while-
They aren’t so bad, if you’d learn to let go.
I’ll let you cry on my shoulder,
And I’ll go crazy with worry,
Then hatred and despair,
As I realise it’s all a lie just to make me-of course!-
Pay attention to you.
When will I learn?
I guess trust is overrated, anyway.
Since I know that you can’t keep a secret.
Even though all of yours
Are kept in a locked vault in my mind.
No one likes being used, dear.
In case you haven’t noticed, we’ve all been trying to tell you-
Stop overdramatising everything. It gets old.
Especially since we’re all going through the exact same thing.
So go to your new friends for fun and games,
Weekend parties and movie excursions.
I don’t care.
Just tell your sob story to someone else next time.
I’m done listening.
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Post by Dragonheart on Sept 7, 2005 22:50:52 GMT -5
nothing sucks here Dijon...as it is really good poem
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Post by dijonketchup on Sept 8, 2005 17:08:03 GMT -5
Aww, thanks, DH.
And now, since I'm a poetry machine (and had to write this for SCIENCE homework...)
Moonlight Sonata (working title only)
I walk along
The old, worn path, deep in the woods,
Created by thousands of footsteps
Throughout the years.
Moonlight is my only guide
Luminescent beams broken by the
Leaves high above, rustling as
The trees tell their stories that
Began before time.
Gazing up, the stars are ablaze with fire,
Silver threads in heavy velvet that cloaks the world.
All is silent- No crickets sing of summer now.
I dare not make a sound, lest I
Break the enchantment that holds my mind
As I look up through the trees and
Lose myself in the night.
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Post by BeiNtelligentLater on Sept 8, 2005 17:21:51 GMT -5
I really like that one dijon!!!!
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It's nice, because what you write mirrors how I feel quite a bit. 
